Comments on my Informative Review:

Peer 1:

Hi Anthony,

– Format of report is well done.  However you are missing page number on the header.

– I feel like if the sentence ” Scientist have been examining the respiratory system for centuries” isn’t really necessary.

–  check for little grammatical errors, you missed the word of in your sentence, ” In the study it was found that the lung could be considered around the age 20-25.”

– I think you are being too vague in your fifth paragraph, maybe add more detail pertaining to specific group of people,  each group has different ways to protect themselves, some have to be more cautious than others.

–  overall, I think you did meet the objective of informing to the reader. Your essay was concise and well structured.

Hope this helps.

 

Peer 2:

Hi Anthony,

-make sure you include the page number in the header on the right-hand side

-Good introduction paragraph

-I believe the first sentence of your second paragraph is unnecessary

-I believe your essay was organized very well and straightforward

-make sure you put the title of the article within your text in Italics and not in quotations

-good concluding paragraph

I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions.